# Editor-Not-Satisfied-Customer Scored Check - Chapter 11

## Score

8.1 / 10

## Verdict

COMMITTABLE AFTER CLAUDE-OWNED AUDITS, assuming Dialogue/Comedy/Thought Development do not return blockers.

## Criteria

- Chapter-card enactment: PASS. Evidence: frame-shop errand, Dom's form, Ruth/Sam access history, Priya/Ben application, and studio/cubby close all enact "Categories."
- State change: PASS. June begins as helpful extra art handler and exits unable to treat PARK / BRENNAN as only social cover. Evidence: `Other people had been filling in that line for them since the first night at Sonia's.`
- Reader followability: PASS. Each exchange has a practical object: pickup form, hospital form, HR form, lease application, frame delivery.
- Dialogue work: PROVISIONAL PASS. Strongest risk is Ruth/Sam theme density around lines 61-67, but integration grounds it in hospital/HR consequences.
- Voice: PASS. June's optical/material stance remains distinct.
- Specificity: PASS. Aiello Frame & Glass, kraft, board, miter, regilding, rider, application details, cubbies.
- Biggest residual risk: the chapter is conceptually elegant and may still read slightly designed. Dialogue Doctor and Thought Development should specifically pressure Ruth/Sam lines for lecture drift.

REVISION ORDERS: None pending Claude-owned audits.
