# Chapter 23 Packet Pressure Audit

Target: `output/model_prompts/claude/chapter_draft/chapter_23.md`

Verdict: PACKET-USABLE WITH WATCHES.

## Findings

1. PAYOFF CROWDING WATCH - The packet correctly names the danger ("The chapter carries many payoffs. Keep them in live scenes, not ledger summary.") and gives scene-combining strategies. Future drafter must not add separate scenes for every thread. Highest-risk cluster: `After Class` completion + Dana/Kessler/Asha follow-through + Priya/Ben + Theo boundary. Best defense is a three-scene chapter: studio work, setup interruption, label/boundary close.

2. PORTRAIT CONTINUITY FIX - The packet now enforces the Ch22 rule: "The portrait is not a showcase object" and "Theo's right action is not moving it." This repairs the earlier late-map drift that had the portrait traveling to the showcase. Future Ch23 must make non-movement visible once and then leave the object alone.

3. PRIYA/BEN PAYOFF RISK - The packet's proposed Suffolk payoff is clear enough, but it could still read as admin aside if dropped into setup chatter. It needs an object or action: unsigned lease packet, returned broker envelope, two separate address labels, or Ben deleting a backup route. The line should show slower choice, not explain it.

4. THEO BOUNDARY RISK - The packet gives several possible boundary actions. The future drafter must choose one, not stack them. A public loan/check-out form or a January schedule is enough. Too many boundary signs will feel like a tidy career resolution.

5. CH24 DEPENDENCY - `chapter_24.md` is intentionally provisional. It must be refreshed after final Ch23 prose decides the exact state of `After Class`, the label, Priya/Ben, the blue dish, and Theo's boundary action.

## No-Prose Constraint

No chapter prose was drafted in this packet-prep pass. Claude remains required for any committed Ch23/Ch24 prose.
