# Dialogue Doctor - Chapter 19 - Round: Reader-Directive Sweep (2026-07-24)

Scope: full cold re-read after: Priya's third-question beat expanded with Theo's task-gratitude interiority; Ruth/Sam arrival differentiation beat added; Odile exit gains the rack-look. Updated style rules applied. Prior rounds preserved on disk.

SCENE S1 (pre-class arrivals):
- 1: CLEAN post-edit - each entrant now carries a signature: Mara over-buys coffee, Luis requests the good flat brush, Ben pockets the schedule with "Sorry.", Priya rations her questions and names the dal, Sam reads the stool situation, Ruth squares her coat. No interchangeable turns remain.
- 3: CLEAN - "glad of a job with steps in it" registers Theo's state without a zinger.
- Remaining modes CLEAN.

SCENE S2 (Luis/Mara station intervention):
- All modes CLEAN - "Tonight the room has seven." / "You built the station for two." / "Move it or paint it. Don't half do both." is Luis-plain escalation; Mara's unfinished correction ("Luis--" ... did not finish) is her arc holding (no translation re-added).

SCENE S3 (Odile stool move): all modes CLEAN - "From here," is her minimum-word teaching at maximum kindness; the added exit look down the rack keeps the warmth in action per her updated card ("Same time next week." unchanged).

SCENE S4 (cleanup with Sam): all modes CLEAN - "Got it," plus the shared rack work stays wordless-cooperative; label writing is procedure, not portent.

OVERALL: CLEAN
