# Tension-Naming Conformance Audit - Chapter 01

CARD: `scene engine: June wants a private goodbye; public attention turns goodbye into commitment`; felt experience `tender alarm`.

DELIVERS(private-goodbye-to-public-commitment) - scene 1.
- Enactment: private plan `One look at the painting... home by nine to the boxes` (3); public attention `the nearest dozen people found reasons to be facing this way` (77); dilemma `we are not a couple... The sentence stayed where it was` (85); commitment `wrote *June Park*` (139).
- Sustained: tension enters at crowd blockage, intensifies with Theo/Odile, and closes on the pen handoff.

Weakest stretch: `Winter Kitchen` description (35-49) slows public tension, but it is the private-goodbye half of the named tension.

Chapter verdict: DELIVERS(private-goodbye-to-public-commitment).

REVISION ORDERS: none.
