# Mentor-Scene Audit: Chapter 03

SCENE studio class - elder/teacher: Odile, juniors: cohort/June.

Marker 1 perfectly calibrated anecdote: ABSENT - no anecdote. Odile teaches through timed exercise and clipped critique: `"Press"` (line 119), `"This one looked"` (line 121).
Marker 2 aphorism delivery: PARTIAL BUT LICENSED - Odile's lines are aphorism-grade, but they are diagnoses tied to visible drawings, not transferable life advice. Strongest candidate: `"Thirty seconds does not need an editor"` (line 115) survives because Ruth literally edited a gesture.
Marker 3 graceful reception: ABSENT - June is embarrassed, Mara admits over-fixing, Ben stumbles; nobody receives a clean lesson and becomes improved.
Marker 4 everyone-leaves-improved closure: ABSENT - June leaves with relief and a wrong drawing, but the fake-couple problem deepens.
Marker 5 missing mess: ABSENT - mess present: bad drawings, wrong scale, over-correction, route pressure, and unclaimed charcoal gift.

MESS LEDGER: line 69 failed tiny drawing; line 83 Mara over-fixes; line 99 ugly-decent drawing; line 127 unit pairing with hidden cost.

Scene verdict: HUMAN.

Chapter verdict: MENTORS-HUMAN.

REVISION ORDERS: none.
