# Performance Check - Chapter 13

- UNPERFORMED - criterion 1 keynote cadence. Strongest counter-candidate: "Fine was going onto a flyer. Fine was going into the group thread. Fine was going to sit at the front table..." This is repetitive pressure from a single word, not inspirational stage cadence; it leads into action.
- UNPERFORMED - criterion 2 mission-statement phrasing. Strongest counter-candidate: "Tonight she had been asked to leave one unrescued and still worth looking at." It risks purpose language but stays tied to the panel's damaged room ethics, not a self-definition slogan.
- UNPERFORMED - criterion 3 applause-line endings. Strongest counter-candidate: "The kiss entered the evening..." It is not a scene ending and is offset by sleeve/solvent awkwardness.
- UNPERFORMED - criterion 4 ceremonial wrap-ups. Strongest counter-candidate: "The signal turned green. June stepped off the curb..." The chapter stops on a live hidden object and motion, not a curtain-lowering blessing.
- UNPERFORMED - criterion 5 service-desk tone. Strongest counter-candidate: "You're welcome" from Priya is literal conversational closure and in voice; no canned host narration.

REVISION ORDERS: none.

OVERALL: UNPERFORMED.

