# Wisdom-Dispensing Mentor-Scene Audit - Chapter 05

SCENE lines 27-103 - elder: Odile, junior: June/Theo/cohort.

- Marker 1, perfectly calibrated anecdote: ABSENT - Odile gives no past anecdote. Evidence: her teaching is card/action/correction: `"The chin had told on you. The card asked you to let it"` (line 69).
- Marker 2, aphorism delivery: ABSENT with nearest clean candidate - `"The page can manage without you"` (line 45) is quotable, but it is a direct drawing instruction, not life advice.
- Marker 3, graceful reception: ABSENT - June resists by saying `"The chin was bad"` (line 67); Theo is corrected from `performing stillness` to sitting (line 69), not gracefully improved through insight.
- Marker 4, everyone-leaves-improved closure: ABSENT - June leaves with private evidence and uncertainty (`He had not watched her decide`, line 109), not a resolved lesson.
- Marker 5, missing mess: ABSENT - mess ledger includes misapplied repair, ugly drawing, awkward posture, and Odile's nearly silent final pass (`moved on without a word`, line 103).

MESS LEDGER: June's first contour is wrong because she repairs it (lines 59-69); Theo tries to help in the wrong mode (`made himself into a diagram`, line 49); Odile withholds praise (`moved on without a word`, line 103).

Scene verdict: HUMAN.

Chapter verdict: MENTORS-HUMAN.

REVISION ORDERS: none.
