# Catalog-Prose / System-Tour Audit - Chapter 09

TRACED - criterion 1 shopping-list passages - strongest counter-candidate: "High hundreds. Heat is weird. Freight elevator sticks. Twenty-four-hour access" (line 93). It survives because it answers June's price question and each item changes the feasibility of Dana's studio.

TRACED - criterion 2 gear checks/location tours - strongest counter-candidate: "Roller spun clean... knife wiped, tape and floor sweepings..." (line 127). It is pack-out action ending with the foamcore decision, not a gear checklist for its own sake.

TRACED - criterion 3 catalog paragraphs - strongest counter-candidate: line 13 lists wall damage, schedule, and invoice. It survives because the list defines the job's clock and the wall problem June must solve.

TRACED - criterion 4 system-tour structure - the project-room work section is not one paragraph per system; the sequence cross-wires damage -> color mismatch -> private mark -> phone interruption -> client walk-through.

TRACED - criterion 5 allowable mapping - where lists appear, the mapping is the point: June thinks as a technician trying to keep art/desire out of the room.

REVISION ORDERS: None.

OVERALL: TRACED.
