# Ending Quality Audit - Chapter 12

## Evidence

Final movement: Theo copies June's memory card, bins the safe cards, checks the middle room, packs tomorrow's bag, then on the train adds the paint-order note and puts the card in his inside pocket.

## Criterion Verdicts

- Ends on action/consequence: PASS. The close is custody and preparation, not stillness.
- Avoids single short profundity stamp: PASS. The last sentence is physical and practical.
- Carries the chapter's irreversible change: PASS. The green/white order is now an object Theo will bring into Week 5.
- Avoids over-summary: PASS WITH WATCH. "the right order was the whole memory" is thematic, but bound to paint process and immediately translated into the card note.

## Verdict

PASS. Keep the close; watch the `whole memory` phrasing in Plain Translation.
