**OVERALL: CLEAN.** The round-2 audit is written to `output/critiques/claude/chapter_02.dialogue_doctor_round2.md`. All three prior blocking findings are verified fixed, and the full nine-criterion re-audit of the repaired chapter produced no new findings.

**Verification of the three repairs:**

1. **Missing interiority (Odile stretch, 113–133) — fixed.** Both pressure points the finding named now carry Theo's mind: the card-strike gets "Theo's first instinct was to tell June this was normal. It was normal, in the way Odile's normal behavior became a problem only when someone else was close enough to watch it" (risk-calculation per his card, and it stops short of decoding Odile, so the Ch-28 guardrail holds), and the "Ignore the second paragraph" jab gets cost and watcher registered ("June did not look at him quickly, which made it worse").
2. **Theo's twin epigram caps — fixed.** Both replaced with "I don't know" + flat fact, his card's under-pressure spec. I checked the replacements for residual polish: "the final noun" is licensed by the narration two paragraphs earlier ("He stopped tracking which names got which noun"), so it reads as shop-talk, not wit.
3. **June's over-workshopped diagnosis — fixed.** "On paper." is her card's compression-when-exposed, and the probe sequence now carries exactly one diagnosis (the protected "load-bearing language" line).

**Hardest calls in the fresh audit** (all survive, with quoted counter-candidates in the file): the symmetric "Yes."/"Yes." volley (the symmetry is the auditor's read-back of the nontransferable clause, and it breaks after two beats); the one-word "Enrolled," (the minimalism is the concealment itself, priced by June's reaction); the brief dry-compact convergence in the unpacking beat (role anchors hold under covered attribution — June reads objects, Theo explains the institution); and June's exit warning followed by silence (the focalizer registers it via "the lie reduced to objects he could file," so the loaded-silence cut-list bullet doesn't apply).

Two structural notes recorded in the file: the manifest declares this chapter as one scene (lines 2–167), so I kept round 1's 01-A/01-B sub-block ids for cross-reference and promoted the email exchange to a full block (01-E) with all nine criteria — the reading guide declares no written-form exclusions, so none were invoked. The mechanical gate's two uncontracted-dialogue WATCH hits ("She is my boss" / "Staff have never taken the class") were re-adjudicated as rule-4 deliberate-precision carve-outs. Protected lines are all intact. No revision orders; the chapter clears for the next stage.
