# Surprise Audit - Chapter 14

- SURPRISES - category: character revelation - THE MOVE: "`Can I take these? All of them.`" - location: catalog table - why unpredicted: the chapter trains the reader to expect Theo will control the danger by flagging pages or keeping the catalogs in the room; June instead asks to take the whole run - why coherent: she entered wanting "twenty of them in a row" and "the bad examples too," so the ask follows her craft logic.
- SURPRISES - category: plot turn - THE MOVE: "`There's a bag,`" - location: catalog handoff - why unpredicted: Theo has the safer answer nearly started: "He could flag the useful pages..." - why coherent: his care style is prevention, transport, and logistics; the wrong decision is exactly how he loves.
- SURPRISES - category: striking image - THE MOVE: "The third shelf had a gap in it now, a clean dustless rectangle on the left side" - location: final stockroom beat - why unpredicted: the chapter could end on the tote or the street crossing; instead it shows the physical absence left by the transfer - why coherent: Theo's POV thinks in storage, shelves, keys, and inventory.

Chapter verdict: `SURPRISES`.

REVISION ORDERS: none.
