# Editor-Scored Check - Chapter 19

Scored as draft-after-integration, before Claude risk-audit repairs.

| criterion | score / 5 | evidence |
|---|---:|---|
| Chapter enacts card-specific work | 5 | public absence and empty-side canvas are the engine |
| Pressure changes irreversibly | 5 | cohort sees rupture; canvas is stained/labeled/racked |
| Scene action followable | 4 | table/ground staging is now coherent after size repair |
| Dialogue does scene work | 4 | Luis/Mara/Priya/Odile lines change pressure; Dialogue Doctor pending |
| Voice differentiation | 4 | strong owned care moves; Ben/Priya low risk |
| Premise-specific detail | 5 | twelve-by-sixteen ground, assignment card, Wk 7 label, unvarnished fear canvases |
| Prose freshness | 4 | strong material action; risk around the kept-room formulation sent to Plain Translation |
| Ending | 4 | clean empty jar is strong; Plain Translation should test for symbolic neatness |

Overall: 35/40. Committable only after Claude risk audits clear or repairs execute.

REVISION ORDERS: none from Codex at this stage.
