# Surprise Audit: Chapter 02

- SURPRISES — category: character revelation — THE MOVE: "She took the pen from him for the eighth and wrote PARK / BRENNAN herself, in the blue ink" — location: scene 2, line 47 — why unpredicted: the previous beat frames Theo as the staff member producing labels; Odile taking over only the eighth label is a sharper intervention than generic wording fuss. Why coherent: Ch01 already established Odile's precise public "mistake," and this chapter shows her crossing out pair/couple language repeatedly.
- SURPRISES — category: comedic non-sequitur — THE MOVE: "\"The fruit is free. The cards cost three hundred dollars.\"" — location: scene 3, line 133 — why unpredicted: the immediate question is whether the clementines belong to class logistics; Odile answers with an accounting joke that also asserts her odd economics. Why coherent: Odile's voice card licenses dry, imperative, logistics-based care.

Chapter verdict: SURPRISES.

REVISION ORDERS: none.
